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what do you feel most inspired about JK Rowling

what do you feel most inspired about JK Rowling 7PlVY
JK Rowling inspired me to with passion. I'm impressed because she's a strong woman; she overcame a difficult, depressive period of her life so that she is now a successful person. And in 2004, Forbes named Rowling as the first person to become a U. S. -dollar billionaire by writing books. She is the famous writer of Harry Potter works - many people's childhood. Besides, Harry Potter is also my favorite book. And When I read Harry Potter I was very interested. I think Harry Potter inspired me a lot, comforted me when I was in despair, became my friend when I was bored, and taught me subtle lessons. And now, Ms. Rowling has also published Fantastic Beats, which is also a great and meaningful book. I think she and her books taught me a lot of lessons, especially they taught me self-confidence and showed me a beautiful friendship.
JK Rowling inspired me to with passion. I'm impressed
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Harry Potter inspired me a lot, comforted me when I was in despair, became my friend when I
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, and taught me subtle lessons. And
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IELTS essay what do you feel most inspired about JK Rowling

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