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introduce your hometown for everyone to know

introduce your hometown for everyone to know wOAPE
I grows up in Dong Thap where knowns as thethe second largest paddy field in Vietnam that provides and exports the tons of rice year-by-year for the citizens in Vietnam in particular and over the world in general. Dong Thap, however, is located in Mekong Delta and near Cambodia not only have the potential in developing articulture and pisciculture but in economic as well. In some extents, Dong Thap plays the vital roles where bargaining position in political, commerce, defence. On the other hand, Dong Thap also the good destinition to travel and experience. The tourist can enjoy the traditional foods, explore the culture, history and the kinda and hospitable people in there. I am proud of being Dong Thap resident and I want to introduce my lovely hometown where I am mature day-by-day.
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up in Dong
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Thap
where
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knowns
as
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thethe
second largest paddy field in Vietnam that provides and exports the tons of rice year-by-year for the citizens in Vietnam
in particular
and over the world
in general
. Dong
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Thap
,
however
,
is located
in Mekong Delta and near Cambodia not
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only
have the potential in developing
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articulture
and
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pisciculture
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but
in economic
as well
. In
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some
extents, Dong
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Thap
plays the vital roles where bargaining position in political, commerce,
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defence
.
On the other hand
, Dong
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Thap
also
the
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good
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destinition
to travel and experience. The tourist can enjoy the traditional foods, explore the culture, history and the kinda and hospitable
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people
in there. I am proud of being Dong
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Thap
resident and I want to introduce my lovely hometown where I am mature day-by-day.
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IELTS essay introduce your hometown for everyone to know

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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