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It is easy to be seen that more and more women work outside their homes and have access to higher education than a decade ago. Some people might think that men finally have a better outlook on gender equality and thus this is the chance for the women to develop themselves and shine on their own ways. However, this change does reflect the ruthless fact that women has not yet fully recognized for their talents and contributions to outside and inside the family.
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IELTS essay difference between woman and man

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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