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Red bracelets are gradually becoming a hot trend among young people. It is not only a piece of jewelry, a highlight for women. It also has spiritual and cultural significance. According to folklore, red bracelets bring good luck to the user. Above all, it also helps lonely people find their other half. But is this what it means? Where should you buy the best quality red thread? Let's find out in the article below!
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. It is not
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's find out in the article below!
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IELTS essay introduce your bracelets

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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