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The meaning of the red bracelets on the wrist

The meaning of the red bracelets on the wrist GwYVQ
The red bracelets originate from Jews, Buddhists, and Hindus. In Vietnam, red thread bracelets have a close relationship with spiritual issues. In particular, in the first days of the year, when going to the temple, people often bring a red thread to pray for peace and luck. When wearing red bracelets you will receive: As a talisman, bringing good luck, banishing risks in life Bringing the effects of feng shui, health Be protected by your side, pray for love, bring good luck, get rid of poison Bringing the owner a confident attitude and the ability to communicate fluently. For pregnant women, when wearing a red thread bracelet, will have good health, giving birth to around mother and a square child For babies, bring prosperity, peace. Help your baby grow up quickly, sleep well, sleep deeply, not startle, smart. Protect your baby when there is strong yin.
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thread
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have a close relationship with spiritual issues.
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thread to pray for peace and luck. When wearing
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you will receive:

As a talisman, bringing
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good
luck, banishing
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risks
in life Bringing the effects of
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shui
, health

Be protected
by your side, pray for
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love
, bring
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good
luck,
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get
rid of poison

Bringing the owner a confident attitude and the ability to communicate
fluently
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For pregnant women, when wearing a
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thread
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bracelet
, will have
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health, giving birth to around mother and a square child

For babies, bring prosperity, peace.
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Help
your baby grow up
quickly
, sleep well, sleep
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, not startle, smart. Protect your baby when there is strong yin.
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IELTS essay The meaning of the red bracelets on the wrist

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
146 words
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