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Alright, some things seem to bring me joy.

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Alright, some things seem to bring me joy. It starts with the small things that are meaningful in my life. My initial point would be that when I finish a hard day after work, and I'm walking down the road, suddenly I listen to my favorite song or eat yummy dishes. As soon as I see children who help older people across the road, give up their seat on the bus for a woman having a baby, something like that. Those are actions very simple. We can see everywhere. All of these things make me smile and I feel blissful actually. A second feature which I should mention is that I feel the happiest when I'm beside my family. We enjoyed the meals, talking about our lives, singing karaoke, dancing. It is a really great time for me. That feels safe, believing in each other, fun, and love unconditional.
Alright,
some
things seem to bring me joy. It
starts
with the
small
things that are meaningful in my life. My initial point would be that when I finish a
hard
day after work, and I'm walking down the road,
suddenly
I listen to my favorite song or eat yummy dishes. As
soon
as I
see
children who
help
older
people
across the road, give up their seat on the bus for a woman having a baby, something like that. Those are actions
very
simple. We can
see
everywhere. All of these things
make
me smile and I feel blissful actually. A second feature which I should mention is that I feel the happiest when I'm beside my family. We enjoyed the meals, talking about our
lives
, singing karaoke, dancing. It is a
really
great time for me. That feels safe, believing in each other, fun, and
love
unconditional.
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IELTS essay Alright, some things seem to bring me joy.

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