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Introduce about your favourite singer

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Among all the singers in Vietnam, my favorite is Thuy Chi. Not only a singer but she is also a music instructor. no scandal, no pr, she just stands up with her own ability which is her voice, what has been confirmed as her brand. Thuy Chi is best known for being unofficially released songs on the Internet. She was praised as a singer with a very good voice: soaring, sweet, pure. Success on the Internet has helped Thuy Chi be selected to perform at VTV3's 2005 Vietnamese Songs program. Although she began to gain public recognition and recommended her career as a singer, Thuy Chi affirmed that singing was just a hobby and she still wanted to become a piano teacher because she felt that she didn't fit in the stage.
Among all the
singers
in Vietnam, my favorite is
Thuy
Chi. Not
only
a
singer
but
she is
also
a music instructor.
no
scandal, no pr, she
just
stands up with her
own
ability which is her voice, what has
been confirmed
as her brand.
Thuy
Chi is best known for being
unofficially
released songs on the Internet. She
was praised
as a
singer
with a
very
good
voice: soaring, sweet, pure. Success on the Internet has
helped
Thuy
Chi
be selected
to perform at VTV3's 2005 Vietnamese Songs program. Although she began to gain public recognition and recommended her career as a
singer
,
Thuy
Chi affirmed that singing was
just
a
hobby and
she
still
wanted to become a piano teacher
because
she felt that she didn't fit in the stage.
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IELTS essay Introduce about your favourite singer

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  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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