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Internet positive and negative effect

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In this contemporary era, although internet is very useful for online shopping and video chat, it is not completely free from drawbacks. This essay will explain both merits and demerits of internet. To commence with first notion, there are myraid reason to be shared in its favour. The First and foremost is it helps to do unline shopping nowadays people does not have time to do shopping. For instance a recent government survey conclude that 80% people use internet and Mak their life easier. furthermore it helps to chat and video call with family and make relationship strong. On other hand, Thera are obvious disadvantage having internet. The most prominent one is it makes people lazy, in order to fact that they do most of the things from internet. apart from that, continuously using internet effect the concentration power. Although, internet is very crucial for our daily life, it has some drawbacks.
In this contemporary era, although internet is
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very
useful for online shopping and video chat, it is not completely free from drawbacks. This essay will
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explain
both merits and demerits of internet.

To commence with
first
notion, there are
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myraid
reason to
be shared
in its
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favour
. The
First
and foremost is it
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helps
to do
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unline
shopping nowadays
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people
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does
not have time to
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do shopping
.
For instance
a recent
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government
survey conclude that 80%
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people
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use
internet and
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Mak
their life easier.
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furthermore
it
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helps
to chat and video call with family and
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make
relationship strong.

On other hand,
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Thera
are obvious disadvantage having internet. The most prominent one is it
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makes
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people
lazy, in order to fact that they do most of the things from internet.
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apart
from that,
continuously
using internet effect the concentration power.

Although, internet is
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very
crucial for our daily life, it has
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some
drawbacks.

IELTS essay Internet positive and negative effect

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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