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Internet positive and negative effect

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In this contemporary era, although internet is very useful for online shopping and video chat, it is not completely free from drawbacks. This essay will explain both merits and demerits of internet. To commence with first notion, there are myraid reason to be shared in its favour. The First and foremost is it helps to do unline shopping nowadays people does not have time to do shopping. For instance a recent government survey conclude that 80% people use internet and Mak their life easier. furthermore it helps to chat and video call with family and make relationship strong. On other hand, Thera are obvious disadvantage having internet. The most prominent one is it makes people lazy, in order to fact that they do most of the things from internet. apart from that, continuously using internet effect the concentration power. Although, internet is very crucial for our daily life, it has some drawbacks.

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 both merits and demerits of internet.

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