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Although government are trying their level best rpad accidents are increasing. Suggest some possible solution 5o to decrease the number of road accidents.

Although government are trying their level best rpad accidents are increasing. Suggest some possible solution 5o to decrease the number of road accidents. o835D
Despite, government best efforts, road accidents are on rising. This essay will discuss how widening the road and using advance technology could help reduce the number of road accidents. One viable solution to cut the number of roads casualties is to woden the road. In other words, at present every person prefer to have their personal vehicles and it is also true that maximum roads are narrow. Therefore, when the proportion of motors rise on such type of roads then there is greater risk of road accidents. If road can be broadened then there is h8ghly likely that there will be fall in the number of road accidents due to the fact that on the wider roads vehicle are able to move easily. Take the USAvfor example, there are four lane roads as result, this country has minimum proportion of road accidents. Another feasible solution to decrease the number of road fatalities is to introduce advance technology in vehicles. This is to say that, this is frequently noticed that numerous individuals drive their vehicle completely carelessly. As a result, such people can not control their vehicles on time, which often leads to serious road accidents. Thus, is speed controlling technologies are used in motor vehicles then it is possible that speed can automatically decrease of vehicles on right time. For example, if sensors are fixed in vehicles then these sensors can control the speed of vehicles in case of when driver tries to drive it at over speed in residential areas. For instance, BMW, which has recently launched a version of it's car having sensors that are capable to limit the speed in residential areas. In conclusion, i strongly in favor of this statement that to overcome the problem of fatal accidents government should install sensors which can control the speed of vehicles and government ought to construct wide roads.
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accidents
are on rising. This essay will discuss how widening the
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road
and using advance technology could
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help
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reduce
the
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number
of
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road
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accidents
. One viable solution to
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cut
the
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number
of
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roads
casualties is to
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woden
the
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road
.
In other words
, at present every person prefer to have their personal
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vehicles
and it is
also
true that maximum
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roads
are narrow.
Therefore
, when the proportion of motors rise on such type of
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roads
then there is greater
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risk
of
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road
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accidents
. If
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road
can
be broadened
then there is
h8ghly
likely that there will be fall in the
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number
of
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road
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accidents
due to the fact that on the wider
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roads
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vehicle
are able to
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move
easily
. Take the
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USAvfor
example, there are four lane
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roads
as result, this country has minimum proportion of
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road
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accidents
. Another feasible solution to decrease the
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number
of
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road
fatalities is to introduce advance technology in
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vehicles
. This is to say that, this is
frequently
noticed that numerous individuals drive their
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vehicle
completely
carelessly
.
As a result
, such
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people
can not control their
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vehicles
on time, which
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often
leads to serious
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road
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accidents
.
Thus
, is
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speed
controlling technologies are
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used
in motor
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vehicles
then it is possible that
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speed
can
automatically
decrease of
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vehicles
on right time.
For example
, if sensors are
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fixed
in
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vehicles
then these sensors can control the
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speed
of
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vehicles
in case of when driver tries to drive it at over
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speed
in residential areas.
For instance
, BMW, which has recently launched a version
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of it's car
having sensors that are capable to limit the
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speed
in residential areas.
In conclusion
, i
strongly
in favor of this statement that to overcome the problem of fatal
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accidents
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government
should install sensors which can control the
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speed
of
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vehicles
and
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government
ought to construct wide
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roads
.
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IELTS essay Although government are trying their level best rpad accidents are increasing. Suggest some possible solution 5o to decrease the number of road accidents.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
310 words
5.5
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