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had a very interesting phone conversation recently and I would like to talk about it. It was Sunday and the clock was ticking at around 11. 00 am. All of a sudden I got a phone call and I received it. It was very baffling initially as I was confused whether it was a recorded message or a real person was talking over the phone. I stopped the girl who was talking and asked her to talk very slowly. She was a marketing executing of some sort of electronic consumer selling office. She told her name Anne and I had real double whether that was her actual name or not! She called me to talk about some promotional offers their company had announced. I told her that I was not interested but she was quite persistent not to let me drop the phone. I am quite acquainted with annoying marking and call centre phone calls and the type of scams they are after. I told that girl I would not be interested in buying anything and then she told me whether I would be interested in buying an electric shaver! That was quite a coincident because I was indeed in

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told
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She
 called me to talk about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 promotional offers their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 had announced. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscloserevealinstructconfessmentionexplain
told
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but
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let
 me drop the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
. I am quite acquainted with annoying marking and call Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
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phone
 calls and the type of scams they are after. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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told
 that girl I would not be interested
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anything and
 then she You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscloserevealinstructconfessmentionexplain
told
 me whether I would be interested
 in buying an electric shaver! That was quite a coincident This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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