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International tourism has greatly benefited many places. However, there have been major concerns about its impact on the local environment and inhabitants. Do the negative impacts of international tourism outweigh the benefits?

International tourism has greatly benefited many places. However, there have been major concerns about its impact on the local environment and inhabitants. Do the negative impacts of international tourism outweigh the benefits? ArDLe
Tourism is one of the major income for government, including taxes, hotel and buying luxury products. However, tourism brings some disadvantages, for instance, occupy enormous public resources such as public transportation, and in addition the crowd gathering in some specific destinations where local residents refused to going for. Still, I think the tourism is still beneficial to local taking everything into consideration. Tourism contributes a major income of government. Without tourists, a government should not have enough income especially for some small countries. We cannot rely on our residents' expenditure to support the country. This is just a limited pool and it will finally dissipate. The action to be taken is increasing the amount of tourists, let them spend more on luxury, hotel, and beverage. More and more people can work on those fields and result in diminish of unemployment rate. Even though the annoyance from the tourists might increase because the immeasurable of tourists. Money is what to support the government which we should try to accept the inconvenience bought from the tourism. A well constructed tourism can promote the countries. The way to get verification from international is to build up a famous industry towards the world. As an illustration, Monaco and Macau are prominent for motorsport racing and casinos. Taiwan, namely kingdom of fruit by the cheap and delicious fruits. For government, they need to find a right way to promote their countries, not only for the income from tourism, but also expanding it to various industries, likewise, a business centre or a trading harbour. Raising the public image can lead to a worldwide cooperation, which bought a numerous opportunities on different kinds of industry. To summarize, tourism can trouble the local residents in terms of living environment. Nevertheless, it offers a great opportunity for making money for the government, raising the international image, and creating various jobs for people.
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Tourism
is one of the major
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income
for
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government
, including taxes, hotel and buying luxury products.
However
,
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tourism
brings
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some
disadvantages,
for instance
, occupy enormous public resources such as public transportation, and
in addition
the crowd gathering in
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some
specific destinations where local residents refused to going for.
Still
, I
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think
the
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tourism
is
still
beneficial to local taking everything into consideration.

Tourism contributes a major
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income
of
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government
. Without
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tourists
, a
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government
should not have
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enough
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income
especially
for
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some
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small
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countries
. We cannot rely on our residents' expenditure to support the
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country
. This is
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just
a limited pool and it will
finally
dissipate. The action to
be taken
is increasing the amount of
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tourists
,
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let
them spend more on luxury, hotel, and beverage. More and more
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people
can work on those fields and result in diminish of unemployment rate.
Even though
the annoyance from the
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tourists
might increase
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because
The phrase 'the immeasurable of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the immeasurable of
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tourists
. Money is what to support the
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government
which we should try to accept the inconvenience
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bought
from the tourism.

A well constructed
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tourism
can promote the
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countries
. The way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
verification from international is to build up a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
industry towards the world. As an illustration, Monaco and Macau are prominent for motorsport racing and casinos. Taiwan,
namely
kingdom of fruit by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
and delicious fruits. For
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government
, they need to find a right way to promote their
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countries
, not
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only
for the
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income
from
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tourism
,
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but
also
expanding it to various industries,
likewise
, a business
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centre
or a trading
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harbour
. Raising the public image can lead to a worldwide cooperation, which
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bought
a numerous
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opportunities
on
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different
kinds of industry.

To summarize
,
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tourism
can trouble the local residents in terms of living environment.
Nevertheless
, it offers a great opportunity for making money for the
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government
, raising the international image, and creating various jobs for
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people
.
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IELTS essay International tourism has greatly benefited many places. However, there have been major concerns about its impact on the local environment and inhabitants. Do the negative impacts of international tourism outweigh the benefits?

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