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changing of climate in recent years

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Changing climate is obvious these days. Firstly, I should mention that climate has changed dramatically and this effects on planets, life style, creatures and so on. Secondly, Air pollution makes weather warmer and this cause stopping rain and snow coming down the atmosphere. Less huminety and warm condition can cause different diseseas and human takes effect well on it. due to the fact that, archologist said that, after many years poor of rain in a zone, we can see deserts will appear and creatures change and green plants will gradually die. finally, As an important fact in our live can see the weather and human life have strong corollation and if we dont attention to it, all creatures get its effects from it.
Changing climate is obvious these days.
Firstly
, I should mention that climate has
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changed
dramatically
and this effects on planets, life style, creatures and
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so
on.
Secondly
, Air pollution
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makes
weather warmer and this cause stopping rain and snow coming down the atmosphere. Less
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huminety
and warm condition can cause
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different
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diseseas
and human takes effect well on it. due to the fact that,
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archologist
said that, after
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many
years poor of rain in a zone, we can
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see
deserts will appear and creatures
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change
and green plants will
gradually
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die
.

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finally
, As an
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important
fact in our
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live
can
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see
the weather and human life have strong
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corollation
and if we
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attention to it, all creatures
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its effects from it.

IELTS essay changing of climate in recent years

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
123 words
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