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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? A9Gw
Nowadays traveling abroad for holidays is quite common. International tourism plays vital role for local residents of that particular place. However, some pros and cons are associated with that. This essay will discuss merits and demerits of international tourism. To begin with, tourism is pivotal to boost economy for under developed countries. People get jobs, revenue when many visitors arrives to famous places. Some counties travelers are the only source of income. For example, in India many remote places are full with ancient buildings, and exploring such places helps local residents to earn money. Government can use this money for development in health, education, transportation and many more other things. Moreover, people exchange their culture, traditional with each other. They learn more about the history of that places and ask others to visit such places which will encourage more people to visit that place. On the other side, more visitors resulted in overcrowding which will resulted in pollution. People throw rubbish everywhere as in they do not care. Sometimes facilities are not enough to cop up many people at the same time. Local people's wages might get affected as people from other countries prefer to work there. In additions to that, they lost their own culture and tradition as they want to copy others. There are chances to extinct their local language. To sum up with, tourism is far more important for each country, but people should not forgot their own traditions.
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pros and cons
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with that. This essay will discuss merits and demerits of international tourism.

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with, tourism is pivotal to boost economy for under
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developed countries
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get
jobs, revenue when
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many
visitors
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arrives
to
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famous
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places
.
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counties travelers are the
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only
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, in India
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many
remote
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places
are
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full with
ancient buildings, and exploring such
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places
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helps
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local
residents to earn money.
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Government
can
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use
this money for development in health, education, transportation and
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many
more
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other
things.
Moreover
,
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people
exchange their culture, traditional with each
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other
. They learn more about the history of that
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places
and ask others to visit such
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places
which will encourage more
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people
to visit that place.

On the
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other
side, more visitors resulted in overcrowding which will resulted in pollution.
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People
throw rubbish everywhere as in they do not care.
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Sometimes
facilities are not
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enough
to cop up
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many
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people
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Local
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people
's wages might
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get
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affected
as
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people
from
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other
countries prefer to work there. In additions to that, they lost their
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own
culture and tradition as they want to copy others. There are chances to extinct their
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local
language.

To sum up with, tourism is far more
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important
for each country,
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but
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people
should not
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own
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IELTS essay International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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