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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Nowadays air travel has become the most picked mode of transport to travel among the countries. However, it is also adversely affecting our environment on the other side. I completely in the favour of confining the air services to travel between the borders around the world due to following reasons. The very first and foremost reason to limit the international flight services is that it leads to significant air pollution. As millions of airplanes are travelling around the world on daily basis and each of them consume lots of fuel, which has consequence of emission of the harmful gases in the atmosphere, resulting into the deterioration of the ozone layer and commencement of the global warming. Therefore, in my opinion the international flight services should be banned in order to prevent the air pollution on the large scale. Another possible reason for restricting the international air flight is that, they have become the threat for the species like bird. Because they create high level of noise pollution and emits harmful radiation which is causing the death of bird species on a large scale and leading to the instability in the environment due to disturbances in the food chain. Air and earth creatures are dependent on each other for the food cycle and drastic reduction in the numbers of bird species could lead to instability in the food chain and certainly results into the earth with no air predators. Therefore, this is also another signification reason to stop the abroad flight services. Overall, international flight travelling causing the instability in environment with the remarkable contribution in releasing the air pollutants and becoming the reason of death for the air living creatures. Therefore, restricting the international flight result the heavy drop in the numbers of the airplanes and there will huge reduction in the air pollution and the number of the death of bird species.
Nowadays
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travel has become the most picked mode of transport to travel among the countries.
However
, it is
also
adversely
affecting our environment on the other side. I completely in the
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favour
of confining the
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services to travel between the borders around the world due to following reasons.

The
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very
first
and foremost
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reason
to limit the
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international
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flight
services is that it leads to significant
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air
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pollution
. As millions of airplanes are travelling around the world on daily basis and each of them consume lots of fuel, which has consequence of emission of the harmful gases in the atmosphere, resulting into the deterioration of the ozone layer and commencement of the global warming.
Therefore
, in my opinion the
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international
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flight
services should
be banned
in order to
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prevent
the
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air
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pollution
on the large scale.

Another possible
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reason
for restricting the
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international
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air
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flight
is that, they have become the threat for the species like
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bird
.
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Because
they create high level of noise
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pollution
and emits harmful radiation which is causing the death of
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bird
species on a large scale and leading to the instability in the environment due to disturbances in the food chain.
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Air
and earth creatures are dependent on each other for the food cycle and drastic reduction in the numbers of
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bird
species could lead to instability in the food chain and
certainly
results into the earth with no
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air
predators.
Therefore
, this is
also
another signification
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reason
to
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stop
the abroad
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flight
services.

Overall
,
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international
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flight
travelling causing the instability in environment with the remarkable contribution in releasing the
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air
pollutants and becoming the
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reason
of death for the
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air
living creatures.
Therefore
, restricting the
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international
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flight
result the heavy drop in the numbers of the airplanes and there will huge reduction in the
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air
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pollution
and the number of the death of
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bird
species.
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IELTS essay : International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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