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INTERNATION TRAVEL HAS MANY ADVANTAGES TO BOTH THE TRAVELLERS AND THE CONTRY VISTED DO ADVANTAGE OUTWRIGHT DISADVANTAGE

INTERNATION TRAVEL HAS MANY ADVANTAGES TO BOTH THE TRAVELLERS AND THE CONTRY VISTED DO ADVANTAGE OUTWRIGHT DISADVANTAGE LBxRR
IT IS TURE THAT INTERNATION TRAVEL IS THE WAY OF SPENING PERSIOUS LIVE TO THE OTHER CONTRY JOURNYT OT THE FORIGN NATION BRING MORE BENEFIT RATHER THAN DRAWBACKSTHIS IS NO DOUBT THAT INTERNATION TRAVEL IS VERY COSTER RATHER THAN DOMESTIC TRAVEL WHEN PEOPLE TRAVEL TO OTHER CONTRY THE PEOPLE TO WILIING TO VISIT THE OTHER CONTRY SHOULD HAVE ENOGH MONEY BEACUSE THE TIKET AND ACCODUMATION IS VERY MUCH EXPENSIVE, IS FOR THE CURRENTY THEY HAVE PAY HIGHER AMOUNT. SECOND WHEN THEY VIST THE ONTHER NATION THEY STATRT SUFFERING FROM SOME PROBLEMS LIKE LANGUAGE, BREATHING PROBLEM AND MANY MORE. FOR THE THE INDIAN HAS VISTED THE CHINIA IN 2019 THE PERSON SUFFER FROM CRONRA VIRUS THE INFECTION OF THAT VIRUS HARMS THE INDIANAN PEROPE ALSO
IT IS
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TURE
THAT INTERNATION
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TRAVEL
IS THE WAY OF
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SPENING
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PERSIOUS
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LIVE
TO THE OTHER
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CONTRY
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JOURNYT
OT THE
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FORIGN
NATION BRING MORE BENEFIT
RATHER
THAN
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DRAWBACKSTHIS
IS NO DOUBT THAT INTERNATION
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TRAVEL
IS
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VERY
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COSTER
RATHER
THAN DOMESTIC
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TRAVEL
WHEN
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PEOPLE
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TRAVEL
TO OTHER
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CONTRY
THE
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PEOPLE
TO
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WILIING
TO VISIT THE OTHER
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CONTRY
SHOULD HAVE
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ENOGH
MONEY
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BEACUSE
THE
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TIKET
AND
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ACCODUMATION
IS
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VERY
MUCH EXPENSIVE, IS FOR THE
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CURRENTY
THEY HAVE PAY HIGHER AMOUNT. SECOND WHEN THEY
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VIST
THE
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ONTHER
NATION THEY
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STATRT
SUFFERING FROM
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SOME
PROBLEMS LIKE LANGUAGE, BREATHING PROBLEM AND
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MANY
MORE. FOR
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THE THE
INDIAN HAS
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VISTED
THE
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CHINIA
IN 2019 THE PERSON SUFFER FROM
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CRONRA
VIRUS THE INFECTION OF THAT VIRUS HARMS THE INDIANAN
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PEROPE
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IELTS essay INTERNATION TRAVEL HAS MANY ADVANTAGES TO BOTH THE TRAVELLERS AND THE CONTRY VISTED DO ADVANTAGE OUTWRIGHT DISADVANTAGE

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123 words
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