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Well, I remember the fiction story called Le Petit Prince for Antoine de Saint, that's useful and get to learn something. What I learned from the story of the little prince are that a person works to improve and develop the talent he owns and that a person may recognize some personalities in his life that may have a positive impact on him, so a person must benefit from the experiences and knowledge of others in this life by listening to their experiences and benefiting from them as much as possible. Well, I remember the fiction story called Le Petit Prince for Antoine de Saint, that's useful and get to learn something. What I learned from the story of the little prince are that a person works to improve and develop the talent he owns and that a person may recognize some personalities in his life that may have a positive impact on him, so a person must benefit from the experiences and knowledge of others in this life by listening to their experiences and benefiting from them as much as possible.
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and benefiting from them as much as possible. Well, I remember the fiction
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called Le
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Petit
Prince for Antoine de Saint, that's useful and
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get
to learn something. What I learned from the
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story
of the
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little
prince are that a
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person
works to
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improve
and develop the talent he
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owns
and that a
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person
may recognize
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some
personalities in his
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life
that may have a
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positive
impact on him,
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so
a
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person
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must
benefit from the
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experiences
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life
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IELTS essay Do you have any e-books? Do you have any e-books?

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182 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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