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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of space research

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of space research p59p0
Due to the advancement of the contemporary science, demands of people who desire to go to the universe is getting increase. Aa a result, there are contrast opinions that some universal experts argue that the money to explore the space is worth. However, some other experts believe the costs of space exploration could be used somewhere more useful. In recent years, increasing interests of the universe makes people that the space exploration is worth for humanities. This is because astronauts and astronomers can bring nemerous amounts of cosmos findings which can understand the phenomenons that occur on the earth since there are many cases happenings on the earth has a direct connection with the space. Moreover, active studies based on the space exploration, which are likely to suggest solutions that can help humanities from global climate problems. For example, there are active studies about Mars to populate residents on the earth to there. Mant scientists maintain the only way to save the humanities and animals is to leave the earth as the chances on the earth is rare today. However, some other experts argue that a volume of money that is spending on the space study is unnecessary because many practical problems in society could be solved by using money for study the universe. In addition, if astronomers succeed the space exploration by spending a lot of money on it, the opportunities to visit the space are likely to be limited to the minorities having a lot of money, elite commnities. In regard this, money spending on the universe study could be used where aids are required, such as for kids wh are suffering hunger and detrimental diseases as charity programmes and donations. In conclusion, some experts want to spend money to develop the universe to move there and to save creatures while there are another opinions that money spending on the universe would be valuable when their goal is to help disadvantage people.
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who desire to go to the universe is getting increase.
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a result, there are contrast opinions that
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universal
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experts
argue that the
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money
to explore the
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space
is worth.
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,
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some
other
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experts
believe the costs of
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space
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exploration
could be
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used
somewhere more useful.

In recent years, increasing interests of the universe
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makes
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people
that the
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space
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exploration
is worth for humanities. This is
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because
astronauts and astronomers can bring
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nemerous
amounts of cosmos findings which can understand the phenomenons that occur on the
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earth
since there are
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many
cases happenings on the
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earth
has a direct connection with the
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space
.
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, active
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studies
based on the
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space
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exploration
, which are likely to suggest solutions that can
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help
humanities from global climate problems.
For example
, there are active
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studies
about Mars to populate residents on the
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earth
to there.
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Mant
scientists maintain the
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way to save the humanities and animals is to
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leave
the
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earth
as the chances on the
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earth
is rare
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today
.

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,
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some
other
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experts
argue that a volume of
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that is
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spending
on the
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study
is unnecessary
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because
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many
practical problems in society could
be solved
by using
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money
for
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study
the universe.
In addition
, if astronomers succeed the
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space
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exploration
by
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spending
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a lot of
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money
on it, the opportunities to visit the
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space
are likely to
be limited
to the minorities having
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money
, elite
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commnities
. In regard this,
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money
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spending
on the universe
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study
could be
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used
where aids
are required
, such as for kids
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are suffering hunger and detrimental diseases as charity
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programmes
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conclusion,
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want to spend
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to develop the universe to
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move
there and to save creatures while there are another opinions that
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money
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spending
on the universe would be valuable when their goal is to
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help
disadvantage
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IELTS essay Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of space research

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