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Describe an Interesting Trip You Have Taken

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I was on vacation last weekend with my friends. We stayed in a beautiful seaside hotel which has a beach so we swam and tanned all day. Being with friends was delightful because we didn't see each other for almost a year. Additionally, I enjoyed my stay there as I had not had a holiday for ages and needed to switch off from my daily routine. My favourite place is a campsite near the Aegean Sea where is close to my hometown. It has stunning sightseeing. One side's color is so green with various shades of the forest, and the other side is blue which is my favorite color.
I was on vacation last weekend with my friends. We stayed in a
beautiful
seaside hotel which has a beach
so
we swam and tanned all day. Being with friends was delightful
because
we didn't
see
each other for almost a year.
Additionally
, I enjoyed my stay there as I had not had a holiday for ages and needed to switch off from my daily routine.

My
favourite
place is a campsite near the Aegean Sea where is close to my hometown. It has stunning sightseeing. One side's color is
so
green with various shades of the forest, and the other side is blue which is my favorite color.
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IELTS essay Describe an Interesting Trip You Have Taken

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
109 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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