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CHACO CANYON- INTEGRATED ESSAY

CHACO CANYON- INTEGRATED ESSAY 15Pny
The reading passage discusses the settlement in the Chaco Canyon by discussing the three theories to support the ideas of archeologists. However, the pofessor casts serious doubts on the ideas mentioned in the reading passage based on the evidences those are found in the Chaco Canyon. First of all, the professor discards the theory of residential use of the Chaco Canyon, as the evidences from the site shows that there are very few fire places to support hundreds of families those could be accomodated in that place. Secondly, according to the professor the next theory that supports t. . .
The reading passage discusses the settlement in the
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Chaco
Canyon by discussing the three theories to support the
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ideas
of archeologists.
However
, the
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pofessor
casts serious doubts on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
mentioned in the reading passage based on the evidences those
are found
in the
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Chaco
Canyon.

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First of all
, the professor discards the theory of residential
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the
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Chaco
Canyon, as the evidences from the site
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shows
that there are
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very
few fire places to support hundreds of families those could be
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accomodated
in that place.

Secondly
, according to the professor the
next
theory that supports t.
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IELTS essay CHACO CANYON- INTEGRATED ESSAY

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
100 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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