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Describe one event of your country's history, and explain why it was important.Provide clear explanantions and details in support of your answer.

Describe one event of your country's history, and explain why it was important. Provide clear explanantions and details in support of your answer. n6DNn
Among many significant historical events in a great country like India, the movement for remarriage of widows and the abolition of Sati Daha Pratha(wife's forced death after husband's ) are very important for me. It was the revolution for the upliftment of women's status in Indian society. The great person behind this movement was a social and educational reformist named Raja Ram Mohan Roy. India is a multilingual country with diverse culture and religion. In ancient India, women were considered merely an animal to serve the men. According to the conservative belief of Hinduism, women d. . .
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of women's status in Indian society. The great person behind this movement was a social and educational reformist named Raja Ram
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IELTS essay Describe one event of your country's history, and explain why it was important. Provide clear explanantions and details in support of your answer.

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