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Instructions Read the question below and write an essay dealing with Discuss Both Views Essays. You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan. Only then attempt to write this essay. Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Instructions Read the question below and write an essay dealing with Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan. Only then attempt to write this essay. Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion JkeE
A group of people believe that the key to a well paying job is a high level of skill set and qualification and at the same time there are others who regard work experience to be a vital reason behind earning a handsome salary. In order to form an opinion, it's quite important to understand and discuss both views- importance of high qualification and the work experience to achieve a desirable job with good pay scale. Let's take a closer look at how skills and certifications add value to a job seeking candidate's resume. To begin with, it's the twenty first century, where we live in a technology dependent world. New studies and research give rise to new professions and each year a million graduates enter the job market. And before stepping in, they prepare themselves for the cut-throat competition by not only getting grades and degrees but also opting for other business specific certifications which make them further eligible for the high-paying jobs. For instance, my neighbour's son has just completed his bachelors in computer engineering but he still wants to pursue post graduation followed by a language certification in order to stand out from the crowd and get a step closer to a well paying job. On the contrary, work experience is something that makes a man a known professional. Someone who has spent a lot of time in dealing with various professional situations which have helped him improve his existing skills and pay scale. For example my nephew even after graduating from one of the top five business schools in the country struggled a lot to land a job and the salary package was way too low. On the other hand, my uncle who has been working for the last five years, has a decent job which helps to pay for his basic needs and even luxuries. To conclude, being highly qualified is not the only way to get a well-paying job as without work experience, no company would prefer any candidate for a job. And higher role and attractive salary package only comes with years of hard work and experience.
A group of
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people
believe that the key to a well paying
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job
is a high level of
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skill
set and qualification and at the same time there are others who regard
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work
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experience
to be a vital reason behind earning a handsome salary. In order to form an opinion, it's quite
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important
to understand and discuss both views- importance of high qualification and the
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work
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experience
to achieve a desirable
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job
with
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good
pay scale.
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Let
's take a closer look at how
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skills
and certifications
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add
value to a
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job
seeking candidate's resume.

To
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begin
with, it's the twenty
first
century, where we
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live
in a technology dependent world. New studies and research give rise to new professions and each year a million graduates enter the
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job
market. And
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before
stepping in, they prepare themselves for the
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cut
-throat competition by not
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only
getting grades and degrees
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but
also
opting for other business specific certifications which
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make
them
further
eligible for the high-paying
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jobs
.
For instance
, my
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neighbour
's son has
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just
completed his bachelors in computer engineering
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but
he
still
wants to pursue post graduation followed by a language certification in order to stand out from the crowd and
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get
a step closer to a well paying job.

On the contrary
,
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work
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experience
is something that
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makes
a
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man
a known professional. Someone who has spent
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a lot of
time in dealing with various professional situations which have
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helped
him
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improve
his existing
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skills
and pay scale.
For example
my nephew even after graduating from one of the top five business schools in the country struggled a lot to land a
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job
and the salary package was way too low.
On the other hand
, my uncle who has been working for the last five years, has a decent
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job
which
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helps
to pay for his basic needs and even luxuries.

To conclude
, being
highly
qualified is not the
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only
way to
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get
a well-paying
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job
as without
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work
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experience
, no
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company
would prefer any candidate for a
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job
. And higher role and attractive salary package
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only
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comes
with years of
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hard
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work
and
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experience
.
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IELTS essay Instructions Read the question below and write an essay dealing with Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan. Only then attempt to write this essay. Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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