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in this competitive era debility is to every individual is been always Bina heated debate over whether only hard work or other factors bring financial success in a person's life Accord that an amalgamation of both hard work and other attributes

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in this competitive era debility is to every individual is been always Bina heated debate over whether only hard work or other factors bring financial success in a person's life Accord that an amalgamation of both hard work and other attributes can lead to high monetary achievements working hard is not no doubt on important aspect which can help you achieve your short term and long term financial goals Kishan and prevents make your path easier if an employee works hard and completes target he will definitely be given for few sites such as incentives or bonus an employee will also be promoted and increment in his salary for the more working religiously can help you become a master of particular field once you know any area in an out you can demand for higher payments and on good money does one can succeed in terms of finances by putting and consistent efforts. but only key to success? other creature factors such as skill set educational qualification prior experience and luck are also equally important country Gota work parallel with hard work to enable and individual to overcome financial instability smarter is also important as working hard one needs to know the tactic to work quickly and efficiently to illustrate a smarter person will finish a task within no time, because his method of completing the work will be better and time efficient than his Peer who will take much more time to complete it. does people get high paid if they have a mix of different characteristic all in all I believe that working hard is the most essential factor that can lead to monetary benefit but it would not be possible if other things are not considered one must be an all rounder in order to attain financial stability
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success in a person's life Accord that an amalgamation of both
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your path easier if an employee works
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and completes target he will definitely be
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people
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high paid if they have a mix of
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is the most essential factor that can lead to monetary benefit
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IELTS essay in this competitive era debility is to every individual is been always Bina heated debate over whether only hard work or other factors bring financial success in a person's life Accord that an amalgamation of both hard work and other attributes

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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