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insights of parents on online academic learning of children during covid-19 pandemic

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During Covid 19 pandemic, the format of instruction mainly was online for the primary as well as for higher classes. One of my child who is in second standard had to do three to four tasks per week, that means 1-2 tasks per day, and the length of online classes were about 1hour30minutes to 2 hours per day, and the other one who is in fifth standard had to do almost 5-6 tasks per day, and the length of online classes were about 3-4 hours er day. During online teaching, school used to provide worksheets related to their tasks. At the end of the week, teacher used to ask relevant questions. There were a lot of difficulties and discrepancies occured due to home based learning at first. Firstly, child competence in online learning is very important. It varies from child to child. Children who were habitual of independent learning. They completed their assignments on time but the children who were completely dependant on their parent/teachers. They find it difficult to complete their tasks. In my opinion, physical presence of a teacher has significant
During
Covid 19
pandemic, the format of instruction
mainly
was
online
for the primary
as well
as for higher classes. One of my
child
who
is in second standard had to do three to four
tasks
per week, that means 1-2
tasks
per day, and the length of
online
classes were about 1hour30minutes to 2 hours per day, and the other one
who
is in fifth standard had to do almost 5-6
tasks
per day, and the length of
online
classes were about 3-4 hours er day. During
online
teaching, school
used
to provide worksheets related to their
tasks
. At the
end
of the week, teacher
used
to ask relevant questions.

There were
a lot of
difficulties and discrepancies
occured
due to home based learning at
first
.
Firstly
,
child
competence in
online
learning is
very
important
. It varies from
child
to
child
. Children
who
were habitual of independent learning. They completed their assignments on time
but
the children
who
were completely
dependant
on their parent/teachers. They find it difficult to complete their
tasks
. In my opinion, physical presence of a teacher has
significant
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IELTS essay insights of parents on online academic learning of children during covid-19 pandemic

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