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Information Technology is changing the many aspects of our lives and now dominates on home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of Information Technology outweigh its disadvantages? v.1

Many years ago, it was so hard to know such a word like Information technology but nowadays it is clear that most of us know about the globalization and the rapid development and innovation in technology department not only in our work activities but also in our private homes and leisure activities. Crystal clear that Information technology has changed our lives, for example contacting people became so easy using mobile phones, finaicial dealings became thourgh online applications, booking flight tickets. . etc. In my opinion information technology makes many things easier than before, looking in more detail at for example a scientific reaserach, students and researchers had to do a massive efforts to get information about any topic and they had to go to libraries and to read encyclopideas to accomplish their reaserches, in contrast, today it is extreamely easy to find any kind of information your need thought your computer, laptop or even your mobile phone by searching through engines search, In the other hand, world becam e more complicated place for those who can't deal with technology, for old gennerations who didn't raise up with computers and cell phones and defenetely that creates a gap between generations as we notice in recent era. Most of children nowadays used to have technology items, it is clear that they will suffer from distance socialism in their life because hey used to play individual on their items and didn't deal with people in a proper way in real life and didn't play sports with each others like football as we did during our childhood. At the end, information technology has great benefits for human being but will create new social and psychology diseases for all of us in the future.
Many
years ago, it was
so
hard
to know such a word like
Information
technology
but
nowadays it is
clear
that most of us know about the globalization and the rapid development and innovation in
technology
department not
only
in our work activities
but
also
in our private homes and leisure activities.

Crystal
clear
that
Information
technology
has
changed
our
lives
,
for example
contacting
people
became
so
easy using mobile phones,
finaicial
dealings became
thourgh
online applications, booking flight tickets.
.
etc
.

In my opinion
information
technology
makes
many
things easier than
before
, looking in more detail at
for example
a scientific
reaserach
, students and researchers had to do
a massive efforts
to
get
information
about any
topic and
they had to go to libraries and to read
encyclopideas
to accomplish their
reaserches
,
in contrast
,
today
it is
extreamely
easy to find any kind of
information
your need
thought
your computer, laptop or even your mobile phone by searching through engines search,

In the other hand, world
becam e
more complicated place for those who can't deal with
technology
, for
old
gennerations
who didn't raise up with computers and cell phones and
defenetely
that creates a gap between generations as we notice in recent era.

Most of children
nowadays
used
to have
technology
items, it is
clear
that they will suffer from distance socialism in their life
because
hey
used
to play individual on their items and didn't deal with
people
in a proper way
in real life and didn't play sports with each
others
like football as we did during our childhood.

At the
end
,
information
technology
has great benefits for human being
but
will create new social and psychology diseases for all of us in the future.
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IELTS essay Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
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