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How bad are traffic jams in yours city?

How bad are traffic jams in yours city? nVOd2
As a person who lives in a city as congested as Tehran, traffic jams drive me up to the wall, especially during rush hour. When you are stuck in traffic there is no way to get out, you have to sit there and mumble about week transportation management and other people like u who didn’t use public transportation. Because in my idea a good way to beat the traffic is using public transportation, but there is always good point and bad point.
As a person who
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in a city as congested as Tehran, traffic jams drive me up to the wall,
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are stuck
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sit there and mumble about week transportation management and other
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like u who didn’t
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way to beat the traffic is using public transportation,
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IELTS essay How bad are traffic jams in yours city?

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