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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. DePk
Bringing positive changes in the environment is the responsibility of the government and large corporations and not of the humans. I would disagree with the statement as it seems to me that the environment can be improved with the collective efforts taken by all individuals along with the government and corporate firms. This essay acquaints us with how the population can enhance our habitat. Climate change is the result of the degrading conditions of our surroundings. To change that we as individuals should make an effort to bring positive modification and stop relying on establishments and government to do so. This can be done by undertaking certain corrective actions by people. Firstly, every person should strive to lower their carbon footprints whenever and wherever possible. Secondly, in addition to reducing carbon dioxide emissions, people should consider curtailing waste generation too. For instance, the society can adapt to sustainable living which can deduct the production of waste to a huge level. Finally, as the younger generations are the future citizens of the world, they must be educated about the harmful effects of our actions on the surroundings. For this purpose, schools should have a compulsory subject on the environment so that children can grow up to be mindful citizens. Alongside this, the firms and government agencies should assist people in taking better care of the environment. For example, Emission Taxes: Like tradable permit systems, tax-based regulatory systems provide incentives for polluters to find cost-effective solutions to emissions control. Firms will either pay the tax or, if it is cheaper, they will reduce emissions to avoid the tax. To sum up, I believe the effects of climate change can be diminished to a great extent with the joints efforts taken by the governments of every nations along with large corporations and the population.
Bringing
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positive
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changes
in the
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environment
is the responsibility of the
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government
and large corporations and not of the humans. I would disagree with the statement as it seems to me that the
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environment
can be
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improved
with the collective efforts taken by all individuals along with the
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government
and corporate firms. This essay acquaints us with how the population can enhance our habitat.

Climate
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change
is the result of the degrading conditions of our surroundings. To
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change
that we as individuals should
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make
an effort to bring
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positive
modification and
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stop
relying on establishments and
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government
to do
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so
. This can
be done
by undertaking certain corrective actions by
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people
.
Firstly
, every person should strive to lower their carbon footprints whenever and wherever possible.
Secondly
,
in addition
to reducing carbon dioxide
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emissions
,
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people
should consider curtailing waste generation too.
For instance
, the society can adapt to sustainable living which can deduct the production of waste to a huge level.

Finally
, as the younger generations are the future citizens of the world, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be educated
about the harmful effects of our actions on the surroundings. For this purpose, schools should have a compulsory subject on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that children can grow up to be mindful citizens. Alongside this, the firms and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
agencies should assist
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in taking better care of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
For example
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Emission
Taxes: Like tradable permit systems, tax-based regulatory systems provide incentives for polluters to find cost-effective solutions to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
emissions
control. Firms will either pay the tax or, if it is cheaper, they will
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reduce
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emissions
to avoid the tax.

To sum up, I believe the effects of climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
can
be diminished
to a great extent with the joints efforts taken by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
of every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "nation"?
nations
along with large corporations and the population.
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IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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