Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. 5lXD
Environment is very popular subject for discussion as we are facing many problems like climate change, global warming and deforestation. While it is irrefutable that government and large companies can take impactful steps to improve the environment, i disagree that individual can't do anything to this problem. This eassay will give how individuals are afffecting the environment and what solutions can be made by them towards improvement of environment. Each and every person on this earth is responsible to environment problems. People are making air and noise pollution by using private vehicles. People use crackers on many occasion which again adds to noise and air pollution. There are many steps which one can take at individual level to contribute towards environment. Firstly, many people are using private vehicles for everyday transportation. Instead of this, if people try to use public transport maximum, it will reduce noise pollution as well as the air pollution. Morever, One should not cut trees if it is not very neccessory. Additionally, Individuals can plant as many trees as possible at their home and in open area. Even if one can plant one tree in a year, total trees planted in a year all over the world, will be very high in number, which will ultimately clean the environment by absorbing the carbon dioxide and releasing the oxygen. To conclude, Contributing to safer and cleaner environment is responsibility of each and every person as it is possible as mentioned above. Individual contribution is very impactful and it remove the stress of government.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Environment
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
popular subject for discussion as we are facing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
problems like climate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
, global warming and deforestation. While it is irrefutable that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and large
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
can take impactful steps to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
disagree that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
can't do anything to this problem. This
Possible spelling mistake found.
eassay
will give how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
are
Possible spelling mistake found.
afffecting
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
and what solutions can
be made
by them towards improvement of environment.

Each and every person on this earth is responsible to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
problems.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
are making air and noise pollution by using private vehicles.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
crackers on
Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: "many occasions".
many occasion
which again
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
to noise and air pollution.

There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
steps which one can take at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
level to contribute towards
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
Firstly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are using private vehicles for everyday transportation.
Instead
of this, if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
public transport maximum, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
noise pollution
as well
as the air pollution.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Morever
, One should not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
if it is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Possible spelling mistake found.
neccessory
.
Additionally
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Individuals
can plant as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
as possible at their home and in open area. Even if one can plant one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tree
in a year, total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
planted in a year all over the world, will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
high in number
, which will
ultimately
clean the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
by absorbing the carbon dioxide and releasing the oxygen.

To conclude
, Contributing to safer and cleaner
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
is responsibility of each and every person as it is possible as mentioned above.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Individual
contribution is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
impactful and it
Did you mean "removes"?
remove
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts