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India and why it is so famous?

India and why it is so famous? 26lxJ
India is the most religious and diversified nation in the world. India is the biggest country in which 22 major languages spoken by Indians each day. It is a country where all communities are involved. It has the largest constitution and it is also a democratic country which gives the right to each people in the country. Indian religions are widely recognized throughout the world. It is known and recognized for its tasty taste of food and spice varieties. Many tourists from all over the world traveling to the various famous places of India like tajmahal, jantar mantra, kutumbinaar and many more which attracts the tourist by its historical past and beauty. There are several other reasons why our country is unique on this planet. Moreover, every Indian called our country with the name motherland. Every one give respect to our country.
India is the most religious and diversified nation in the world. India is the biggest
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in which 22 major languages spoken by Indians each day. It is a
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where all communities
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. It has the largest constitution and it is
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which gives the right to each
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more which attracts the tourist by its historical past and beauty.

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is unique on this planet.
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, every Indian called our
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with the name motherland.

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IELTS essay India and why it is so famous?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
142 words
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