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Indeed, there are certain city’s where the design of houses and office buildings are controlled by local authorities.

Indeed, there are certain city’s where the design of houses and office buildings are controlled by local authorities. e5b5B
Indeed, there are certain city’s where the design of houses and office buildings are controlled by local authorities. However, some of them are asserted that, people should select any structure of their houses and free from regulation. While there are few advantages, I believe that disadvantages certainly outweighed them. On the one hand, there are few advantages of if people are select the design of their houses the main and initial point is that, they fulfil their wants to live in their dream houses. In other words, each and every person have the dream to make the houses according to their satisfaction wise due to this, they should be free from regulation and shows some hard to make their houses. Secondly, it is the point of tourist attraction for example, the recent research has been concluded that in Japan 65% of tourism are escalating due to the different and unique houses as a result, it helps to boom the economy of the country when more Mr are wasting they paid heavy taxes to the government for explore the places. On the other hand, the main disadvantage is that it creates discrimination within the poor and rich people owing to, rich people are financially strong and they use more money on their houses structure which which they like whilst, poor people are suffering from discrimination which effects on the mental ability of the people who belong to poor background. Besides, the same structure of houses increases the burglary rate because, every person know the inner map of the house which thief are easily successful in burglary. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that, same design houses is not good for people however, if they construct their houses according to their want is more beneficial for the economy of the nation.
Indeed
, there are certain
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city’s
where the design of
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houses
and office buildings
are controlled
by local authorities.
However
,
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some
of them
are asserted
that,
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people
should select any structure of their
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houses
and free from regulation. While there are few advantages, I believe that disadvantages
certainly
outweighed them.

On the one hand, there are few advantages of if
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people
are select the design of their
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houses
the main and initial point is that, they fulfil their wants to
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live
in their dream
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houses
.
In other words
, each and every person have the dream to
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make
the
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houses
according to their satisfaction wise due to this, they should be free from regulation and
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shows
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some
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hard
to
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make
their
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houses
.
Secondly
, it is the point of tourist attraction
for example
, the recent research has
been concluded
that in Japan 65% of tourism are escalating due to the
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different
and unique
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houses
as a result
, it
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helps
to boom the economy of the country when more Mr are wasting they paid heavy taxes to the
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government
for explore the places.

On the other hand
, the main disadvantage is that it creates discrimination within the poor and rich
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people
owing to, rich
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people
are
financially
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strong and
they
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use
more money on their
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houses
structure
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which which
they like whilst, poor
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people
are suffering from discrimination which effects on the mental ability of the
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people
who belong to poor background.
Besides
, the same structure of
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houses
increases the burglary rate
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because
, every person know the inner map of the
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house
which thief are
easily
successful in burglary.

In conclusion
, I would like to reiterate that, same design
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houses
is not
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good
for
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people
however
, if they construct their
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houses
according to their want is more beneficial for the economy of the nation.
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IELTS essay Indeed, there are certain city’s where the design of houses and office buildings are controlled by local authorities.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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