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Indeed global human population is incredibly increasing by 1. 1%yearly. there is no doubt in this if population is LB26p

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fair
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Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
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they
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point
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buildings
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meet
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today
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so
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building
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