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Write a paragraph about a product you have bought recently.

Write a paragraph about a product you have bought recently. mWM6L

A product i have bought recently? I don’t have a hobby like shopping or something in the same way. But two month ago, I had spent my money to bring a figure come home. First of all, about the product, so what is figure? You can search “figure” in google image to know more and to visualize. It is a toy model made of plastic with image of character on screen. In the minds of many, figure is a toy refuse but behind it is art, a culture and hobby to cherish. Second, about my figure, when I went to JVF-Japan VietNam Festival- at April, I saw it and in a jiffy i have decided to order it. My figure i bought is based on the image of Saber-King of heroes, which is very picturesque. Nothing to criticize about it, from shape to color, size. It perfect. Athought my wallet is cleaned, exactly it isn’t expensive about 20$ but I don’t have much money. To offset for it, I had to eat noodle until the end of month, and is was really not right for my stomatch. I buy it because a simple reason: I’m a collecter. If you don’t passion, please don’t buy it. Whereas, if you put it next to the light novel and a shelf full of manga, it will be incredible.

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 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 recently? I don’t have a hobby like shopping or something in the same way
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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month
 ago, I had spent my money to bring a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
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come
 home. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, about the product, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 what is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
? You can search You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
“figure”
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many
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figure
 is a toy refuse This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 behind it is art, a culture and hobby to cherish. Second, about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
, when I went to Possible spelling mistake found.
JVF-Japan
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VietNam
 Festival- at April, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 it and in a jiffy Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have decided to order it. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
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i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
is based
 on the image of Saber-King of heroes, which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 picturesque. Nothing to criticize about it, from shape to color, size. It Did you mean "perfects"?perfects
perfect
. Possible spelling mistake found.ThoughtA thought
Athought
 my wallet is cleaned
, exactly it isn’t expensive about The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$20".$20
20$
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I don’t have much money. To offset for it, I had to eat noodle until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of month, and Did you mean "is", "was", or "it was"?iswasit was
is was
really
 not right for my Possible spelling mistake found.stomach
stomatch
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 a simple reason: I’m a Possible spelling mistake found.collectedcollectorcollect er
collecter
. If you don’t passion, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it. Whereas, if you put it next
 to the light novel and a shelf full of manga, it will be incredible. 