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Increasingly larger amounts of plastic end up in marine ecosystem, land habitats and even human settlements. What kind of challenges does this pose? What might be done to mitigate the effects?

Increasingly larger amounts of plastic end up in marine ecosystem, land habitats and even human settlements. What kind of challenges does this pose? What might be done to mitigate the effects? KwlwN
The balance of the environment is disturbed by plastics. Accumulation of plastics poses a threat to every part of life. Life areas, seas, estates are affected by it. The aforementioned issue causes the degradation of the quality of drinking water and soil. Creatures living on land and sea are affected by this situation. However, it is possible to alleviate the problem by taking certain measures like recycling. I would like to begin with how plastics affect the environment and our area. Plastics have some harmful chemicals and it is detrimental to the balance of soil because the aforementioned chemicals leads to the soil to transfer these chemicals into drinking water. In this way, we expose to the scarcity of water because we can not consume chemicals. To exemplify, if we drink contaminated water, we will encounter some prevalent illnesses like bowel disease. That’s why as we cannot drink these waters, this can lead to water shortages and even deaths because drinking water is necessary for being healthy. Another effect of the accumulation of plastics in the areas is that governments losing a lot of money to alleviate this problem. Elimination of chemicals emitted by elastics is expensive and long process. Authorities strive to live in a clean area but it damages budget. In this way, many countries have no chance to allocate money for other developments like investing in technology. It can not be denied that spending a lot of money on these problems causes to not follow and invest the new developments. Despite having some negative effects of plastics on the areas, it can be found remedy for solving the aforementioned problem. Individuals should decrease the usage of plastic because it is in every part of life like shopping bags or bottled water but it is possible to adjust themselves fully to using non-plastic products. For instance, we can bring our bag which is made with fabric to the shopping. In this way, we can stay away from plastic shopping bags. It is worthwhile to note that governments should take precautions for this and it can be increase of the price in plastic bag. Therefore, it can be deterrent to buy these for people because exorbitant prices reduce the purchase of that product. In addition, governments should raise people’s awarenesses for recycling. If recycling increase, plastic is less harmful to nature. To exemplify, incentive programs can be implemented for promoting awareness like seminars. Thus, they are predisposed to avoid contaminate our area because they have an idea how to recycle thanks to the aforementioned programs. To sum up, the increase in plastics causes the scarcity of water and also it leads to countries not to develop. However, there are some solutions for eliminating the aforementioned problems like promoting awareness about recycling or staying away from using elastics. Individuals should find new ideas for this.
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plastics
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poses a threat to every part of life. Life
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areas
, seas, estates are
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affected
by it. The
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aforementioned
issue causes the degradation of the quality of drinking
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water
and soil. Creatures living on land and sea are
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affected
by this situation.
However
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problem
by taking certain measures like recycling.

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begin
with how
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plastics
affect the environment and our
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area
.
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have
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some
harmful
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chemicals
and it is detrimental to the balance of soil
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because
the
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aforementioned
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chemicals
leads to the soil to transfer these
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chemicals
into drinking
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water
. In this way, we expose to the scarcity of
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water
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because
we can not consume
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chemicals
. To exemplify, if we drink contaminated
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water
, we will encounter
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some
prevalent illnesses like bowel disease. That’s why as we cannot drink these
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waters
, this can lead to
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water
shortages and even deaths
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because
drinking
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water
is necessary for being healthy. Another effect of the accumulation of
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plastics
in the
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areas
is that
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governments
losing
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a lot of
money to alleviate this
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problem
. Elimination of
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chemicals
emitted by elastics is expensive and long process. Authorities strive to
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live
in a clean
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area
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but
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many
countries have no chance to allocate money for other developments like investing in technology. It can not
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money on these
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causes to not follow and invest the new developments.

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negative
effects of
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on the
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areas
, it can
be found
remedy for solving the
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aforementioned
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problem
. Individuals should decrease the usage of
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plastic
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because
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bags
or bottled
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water
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but
it is possible to adjust themselves
fully
to using non-plastic products.
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bag
which
is made
with fabric to the shopping. In this way, we can stay away from
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plastic
shopping
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bags
. It is worthwhile to note that
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governments
should take precautions for this and it can be increase of the price in
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plastic
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awarenesses
for recycling. If recycling increase,
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is less harmful to nature. To exemplify, incentive programs can
be implemented
for promoting awareness like seminars.
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are predisposed
to avoid contaminate our
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area
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because
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idea
how to recycle thanks to the
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programs.

To sum up, the increase in
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plastics
causes the scarcity of
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water
and
also
it leads to countries not to develop.
However
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some
solutions for eliminating the
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aforementioned
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problems
like promoting awareness about recycling or staying away from using elastics. Individuals should find new
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ideas
for this.
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IELTS essay Increasingly larger amounts of plastic end up in marine ecosystem, land habitats and even human settlements. What kind of challenges does this pose? What might be done to mitigate the effects?

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