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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

The importance of growing traffic, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. Some people argue that an increase in fuel prices can mitigate traffic congestion and aligned environmental pollution. It is agreed that environmental pollution is a serious problem and increasing fuel cost might help to combat pollution. This essay will discuss the impact of petrol cost on traffic and the other ways to control pollution before coming to a reasoned conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why enhancing the cost of petrol is an advantage, but the most conspicuous one rooted in the fact that increasing petrol price will affect ordinary peoples' usage of vehicles. In other words, when people will have to pay extra for petrol, they may limit using private vehicles and look for the alternative options such as public transport. The less traffic will lead to reduce the environmental pollution. Therefore, it is a good idea to enhance petrol prices. Alternatively, the government should spread awareness about the importance of renewable sources of energy such as solar energy. The ideal part of these resources is that they are convenient and will last forever. The international studies on these sources claimed a safer environment. In addition, the government should own up the fact that renewable energy is best possible solution to reduce environmental pollution. To conclude, from what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that an increase in the cost of petrol can mitigate environmental pollution. Also, the renewable sources of energy are the alternative to control pollution. The government should aware people about their benefits.
The importance of growing
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traffic
, which was always debatable, has
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now
become more controversial.
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Some
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people
argue that an increase in fuel prices can mitigate
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traffic
congestion and aligned
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environmental
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pollution
. It is
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agreed
that
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environmental
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pollution
is a serious problem and increasing fuel
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cost
might
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help
to combat
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pollution
. This essay will discuss the impact of
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petrol
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cost
on
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traffic
and the other ways to control
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pollution
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before
coming to a reasoned conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why enhancing the
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cost
of
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petrol
is an advantage,
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but
the most conspicuous one rooted in the fact that increasing
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petrol
price will affect ordinary peoples' usage of vehicles.
In other words
, when
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people
will
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have to
pay extra for
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petrol
, they may limit using private vehicles and look for the alternative options such as public transport. The less
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traffic
will lead to
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reduce
the
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environmental
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pollution
.
Therefore
, it is a
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good
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idea
to enhance
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petrol
prices.

Alternatively
, the
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government
should spread awareness about the importance of renewable sources of
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energy
such as solar
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energy
. The ideal part of these resources is that they are convenient and will last forever. The international studies on these sources claimed a safer environment.
In addition
, the
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government
should
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own
up the fact that renewable
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energy
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is best
possible solution to
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reduce
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environmental
pollution.

To conclude
, from what has
been discussed
above, it can
be concluded
that an increase in the
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cost
of
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petrol
can mitigate
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environmental
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pollution
.
Also
, the renewable sources of
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energy
are the alternative to control
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pollution
. The
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government
should aware
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people
about their benefits.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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