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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. 1W8q
Gas is very useful in our daily life. As we know that when we want to cook something on the stove, we use gas to light it up. Besides, gas can be very useful for transportation such as cars, motorbikes, buses, and trucks. Nowadays, some modern transportations do not need any gases. They use the power generator to run those cars. Petrol also helps to light up homes in antiquity. Years ago, gasoline was the main fuel for every car. For instance, I have seen a few of aged films which the characters spilled the gasoline into their car. They also used the car wherever they went. Petrol can be a business material. A number of universities provide oil mining majors. It is not easy to get into that study program. When we want to build something, petrol can facilitate construction. The employers change the petrol into materials from our home. If they do not replace the gasoline into cement, brick, poles, etc, I could not imagine how smelly it is. In adverse side, when we keep draining gasoline from its source, we are going to be at the end of the gasoline period. Increasing the price of petrol will not be the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. Pollution not only come from the cars which that use the gasoline, but also it comes from a plethora of factories. Hence, if we raise the price of the petrol, it will not solve the problems. The government should take an action to solve this problem. In conclusion, I prefer use bike rather than car. In addition to saving costs, it also makes us to be more healthy. I'm not sure if the governments escalate the price of the petrol will solve the problems. This due to the fact pollution in our world has increased.
Gas is
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very
useful in our daily life. As we know that when we want to cook something on the stove, we
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use
gas to light it up.
Besides
, gas can be
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very
useful for transportation such as
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cars
, motorbikes, buses, and trucks. Nowadays,
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some
modern transportations do not need any gases. They
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use
the power generator to run those
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cars
.
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Petrol
also
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helps
to light up homes in antiquity.

Years ago,
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gasoline
was the main fuel for every
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car
.
For instance
, I have
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seen
a few of aged films which the characters spilled the
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gasoline
into their
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car
. They
also
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used
the
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car
wherever they went.
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Petrol
can be a business material. A number of universities provide oil mining majors. It is not easy to
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get
into that study program. When we want to build something,
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petrol
can facilitate construction. The employers
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change
the
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petrol
into materials from our home. If they do not replace the
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gasoline
into cement, brick, poles, etc, I could not imagine how smelly it is.

In adverse side, when we
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keep
draining
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gasoline
from its source, we are going to be at the
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end
of the
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gasoline
period. Increasing the price of
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petrol
will not be the best way to
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solve
growing traffic and pollution problems. Pollution not
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only
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come
from the
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cars
which that
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use
the
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gasoline
,
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but
also
it
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comes
from a plethora of factories.
Hence
, if we raise the price of the
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petrol
, it will not
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solve
the problems. The
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government
should take an action to
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solve
this problem.

In conclusion
, I prefer
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use
bike
rather
than
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car
.
In addition
to saving costs, it
also
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makes
us to be more healthy. I'm not sure if the
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governments
escalate the price of the
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petrol
will
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solve
the problems. This due to the fact pollution in our world has increased.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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