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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to sole growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective? v.1

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to sole growing traffic and pollution problems. what other measures do you think might be effective? v. 1
In the 21st Century, global warming is considered to be the most serious problem for mankind. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem associated rising sea caused by climate change is flooding of home highly affected by near coastal areas. This essay proposes certain possible solution to prevent this obstacle. The major problem caused by the increasing sea level rises is the disappearance of coastal areas due to flooding. Millions of people living near the coastal areas, which result is loss of property, life and all their valuable possessions. Shelter is one of the basic necessities of human and widespread flooding caused several people becomes homeless and starved. For example, the recent reported flood in Japan, which wipe out loss of lives and worth 3 million dollars. In order to address this problem, the government of every country should be responsible to protect the environment by global heating. For example, the United Nations has created an organization to secure the environment under control. Another possible solution is to build flood protection barrier near coastal areas. Flood barrier, such as dams, dikes or floodgates so they could be prevented flooding water to enter coastal areas. For example, the Netherland is one of the most populated areas and employed a successful defence system of rising water. To conclude, as a consequence of uplifting of sea level caused by global temperature is one of the most challenging problems, and should be controlled and solved by the combined attempt by the government and individuals.
In the 21st Century, global warming
is considered
to be the most serious
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problem
for mankind. This essay will
first
suggest that the biggest
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problem
associated rising sea
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caused
by climate
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change
is
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flooding
of home
highly
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affected
by near
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coastal
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areas
. This essay proposes certain possible solution to
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prevent
this obstacle.

The major
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problem
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caused
by the increasing sea level rises is the disappearance of
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coastal
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areas
due to
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flooding
. Millions of
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people
living near the
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coastal
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areas
, which result is loss of property, life and all their valuable possessions. Shelter is one of the
Consider using "necessities".
basic necessities
of human and widespread
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flooding
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caused
several
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
becomes
homeless and starved.
For example
, the recent reported flood in Japan, which wipe out loss of
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lives
and worth 3 million dollars.

In order to address this
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problem
, the
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government
of every country should be responsible to protect the environment by global heating.
For example
, the United Nations has created an organization to secure the environment under control. Another possible solution is to build flood protection barrier near
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coastal
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areas
. Flood barrier, such as dams, dikes or floodgates
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so
they could be
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prevented
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flooding
water to enter
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coastal
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areas
.
For example
, the
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Netherland
is one of the most populated
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areas
and employed a successful
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defence
system of rising water.

To conclude
, as a consequence of uplifting of sea level
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caused
by global temperature is one of the most challenging
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problems
, and should
be controlled
and solved by the combined attempt by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and individuals.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to sole growing traffic and pollution problems. what other measures do you think might be effective? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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