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Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption.

Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. VBPPD
Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast food companies would pass on these taxes to consumers in the form of higher prices and this would lead to people not being able to afford junk food. For instance, the cost of organic food has proven prohibitively expensive for most people. Despite this, people in many developed countries, where the problem is most acute, can afford price hikes and will continue to eat high-fat meals. Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast food companies would pass on these taxes to consumers in the form of higher prices and this would lead to people not being able to afford junk food. For instance, the cost of organic food has proven prohibitively expensive for most people. Despite this, people in many developed countries, where the problem is most acute, can afford price hikes and will continue to eat high-fat meals. Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast food companies would pass on these taxes to consumers in the form of higher prices and this would lead to people not being able to afford junk food. For instance, the cost of organic food has proven prohibitively expensive for most people. Despite this, people in many developed countries, where the problem is most acute, can afford price hikes and will continue to eat high-fat meals.
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, the cost of organic
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food
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developed countries
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afford
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price
hikes and will continue to eat high-
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fat
meals.

Increasing
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taxes
would raise
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prices
and lower consumption.
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Fast
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food
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companies
would pass on these
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taxes
to consumers in the form of higher
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prices
and this would lead to
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people
not being able to
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afford
junk
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food
.
For instance
, the cost of organic
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food
has proven
prohibitively
expensive for most
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people
. Despite this,
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people
in
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many
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developed countries
, where the problem is most acute, can
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afford
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price
hikes and will continue to eat high-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
meals.

Increasing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
taxes
would raise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
and lower consumption.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
would pass on these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
taxes
to consumers in the form of higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
and this would lead to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
not being able to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
afford
junk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
For instance
, the cost of organic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
has proven
prohibitively
expensive for most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. Despite this,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developed countries
, where the problem is most acute, can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
afford
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
hikes and will continue to eat high-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
meals.
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IELTS essay Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
225 words
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