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Write a paragragh of about 80 words describing your hometown.

Write a paragragh of about 80 words describing your hometown. Jq97a
I’ve visited to sevral wonderful places around my country. However, I consider my hometown to be one of the great places in my heart. It’s simply a tiny province in the central of VietNam, in the Phu Yen province. The province where I live is quite impressive with fresh air and a healthy environment and it has numberous historical sites such as Tuy Hoa Beach, Nhan’s Tower, …. It depend on the fishing business and tourism along the seaside. In my memories, I remember going to theTuy Hoa’s beach with my parents and relatives on the weekends and vacation when I was a chid and Nhan’s Tower where we can get discover about our country’s history becam a tourist attraction for many people because its architectural beuty and historical values. In conclusion, I’m huge lover of my hometown. It not only has many my childhood memories but also a fantastic place to go and pass the time.
I’ve visited to
sevral
wonderful places around my country.
However
, I consider my hometown to be one of the great places in my heart. It’s
simply
a tiny province in the central of
VietNam
, in the
Phu
Yen province. The province where I
live
is quite impressive with fresh air and a healthy environment and it has
numberous
historical sites such as
Tuy
Hoa
Beach,
Nhan
’s Tower, …. It
depend
on the fishing business and tourism along the seaside. In my memories, I remember going to
theTuy
Hoa
’s beach with my parents and relatives on the weekends and vacation when I was a
chid
and
Nhan
’s Tower where we can
get
discover about our country’s history
becam
a tourist attraction for
many
people
because
its architectural
beuty
and historical values.
In conclusion
, I’m huge lover of my hometown. It not
only
has
many
my childhood memories
but
also
a fantastic place to go and pass the time.
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IELTS essay Write a paragragh of about 80 words describing your hometown.

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