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Increase in anti social behaviour and lack of respect for others

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Nowadays, the world has becomed more technical and morden hence expand in anti social behaviour and lack of respect for other. there are several reasons and solutions of this view that will be discussed. This phenomenon is totally depend on family structure. In 21st century most of family has live in morden era. They know that due to this facility all person are forget their relationship. This phenomenon has been called anti-social behaviour between eachother. Furthermore, education system has becomed more hi-tech and extremely updated hence people are moving away for further studies from their respective so decrease relationship with eachother. For example, report of “THE PUBLIC NEWS” in 2019. Report is that 92% family members not proper taking with each other in free time and 76% parents have not time for their child due to their profession. On positive side, This problem's solution completely dependent on children's parents and their schools. Children can easy to excess android device and internet consequently they having totally focus on it due to they can't group discussion. Parents should take some measurements against this situation and explain their children that which thinks correct and which fector happen positive impact on child and also share our personal experiences about respect and relationship. Furthermore school should do add syllabus about older respect and family. For instance, report of “THE TIMES OF INDIA” in 2019. This report explain that 64 % schools have added proper lecture about relationship. In conclusion, in society grew a anti-social behaviour and lack of respect due to this over uses of internet and games. This problem may be solve quickly if parents should take some measurements.
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more technical and
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morden
hence
expand in
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anti social
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behaviour
and lack of
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respect
for other.
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there
are several reasons and solutions of this view that will
be discussed
.

This phenomenon is
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depend
on
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family
structure. In 21st century most of
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family
has
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live
in
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morden
era. They know that
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due
to this facility all person are
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forget
their relationship. This phenomenon has
been called
anti-social
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behaviour
between
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eachother
.
Furthermore
, education system has
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becomed
more hi-tech and
extremely
updated
hence
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people
are moving away for
further
studies from their respective
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so
decrease relationship with
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eachother
.
For example
,
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report
of “THE PUBLIC NEWS” in 2019.
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Report
is that 92%
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family
members not proper taking with each other in free time and 76%
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parents
have not time for their child
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due
to their profession.

On
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positive
side, This problem's solution completely dependent on children's
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parents
and their schools. Children can easy to excess android device and internet
consequently
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they having
totally
focus on it
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due
to they can't group discussion.
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Parents
should take
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some
measurements against this situation and
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explain
their children that which
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thinks
correct and which
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happen
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positive
impact on child and
also
share our personal experiences about
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respect
and relationship.
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Furthermore
school should do
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add
syllabus about older
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respect
and
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family
.
For instance
,
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report
of “THE TIMES OF INDIA” in 2019. This
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report
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explain
that 64 % schools have
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added
proper lecture about relationship.

In conclusion
, in society grew
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a
anti-social
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behaviour
and lack of
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respect
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due
to this over
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uses
of internet and games. This problem may be
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solve
quickly
if
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parents
should take
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some
measurements.
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IELTS essay Increase in anti social behaviour and lack of respect for others

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
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