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in your opinion which one is more important to learn, english or local languages?

English is a gateway to the world and no one should be deprived of the opportunities that arise for those with a strong command of the English language. This does not mean that local languages are dispensable, however. They have an important role to play in supporting education, including English language education. People who insist on prioritising local languages are often those who can speak fluent English themselves. Advocates of minority languages need to be fluent in English in order to research their field and support the cause at international conferences. in doing so, however, they are also demonstrating why English is so important.
English is a gateway to the world and no one should
be deprived
of the opportunities that arise for those with a strong command of the English
language
. This does not mean that local
languages
are dispensable,
however
. They have an
important
role to play in supporting education, including English
language
education.

People
who insist on
prioritising
local
languages
are
often
those who can speak fluent English themselves. Advocates of minority
languages
need to be fluent in English in order to research their field and support the cause at international conferences.
in
doing
so
,
however
, they are
also
demonstrating why English is
so
important
.
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IELTS essay in your opinion which one is more important to learn, english or local languages?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
104 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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