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In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic a successful student must have? Describe the characteristic and give your reasons about your opinion. v.1

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic a successful student must have? Describe the characteristic and give your reasons about your opinion. v. 1
Spending life in a country where communication has to be done in a foreign language is socially and practically problematic. I agree to this statement as the language has a central role in all communications. Life in a foreign country where one has to communicate with foreign language can pose several social problems as a result of difficulty in communications. Whenever someone wants to talk to other people language barrier will always be there unless he is an expert in the native language. For instance, every culture has innate words and etiquettes which have to be followed while communicating with others and the absence of these from conversations will render a person illiterate or ill mannered. Hence, local people will try to avoid him and may result in his social isolation. The difficulty in speaking foreign languages may result in practical problems in form of education. Most countries in the world have language of teaching in their own language and the books are also published in local language. Hence, if a person has to study in that particular country he has to know the language after that he will be able to study. This was especially observed when many Pakistani students went to Iran for medical studies. All the books of medicine were in Persian which is their local language and students suffered a great deal during studies. In addition, they had difficulty inwards when taking histories from local people which is part of the medical curriculum. In conclusion, life in a foreign country has several problems and language seems to be a bigger problem with its influence on the social interaction of people.
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country
where communication
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has to
be done
in a
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foreign
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language
is
socially
and
practically
problematic. I
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agree
to this statement as the
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language
has a central role in all communications.

Life in a
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foreign
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country
where one
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has to
communicate with
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foreign
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language
can pose several social
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problems
as a result
of difficulty in communications. Whenever someone wants to talk to other
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people
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language
barrier will always be there unless he is an expert in the native
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language
.
For instance
, every culture has innate words and
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etiquettes
which
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have to
be followed
while communicating with others and the absence of these from conversations will render a person illiterate or
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ill mannered
.
Hence
,
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local
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people
will try to avoid him and may result in his social isolation.

The difficulty in speaking
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foreign
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languages
may result in practical
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problems
in form of education. Most
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countries
in the world have
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language
of teaching in their
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own
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language
and the books are
also
published in
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local
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language
.
Hence
, if a person
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has to
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study
in that particular
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country
he
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has to
know the
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language
after that he will be able to
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study
. This was
especially
observed when
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many
Pakistani students went to Iran for medical
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studies
. All the books of medicine were in Persian which is their
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local
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language
and students suffered a great deal during
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studies
.
In addition
, they had difficulty inwards when taking histories from
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local
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people
which is part of the medical curriculum.

In conclusion
, life in a
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foreign
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country
has several
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problems
and
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language
seems to be a bigger
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problem
with its influence on the social interaction of
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people
.
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IELTS essay In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic a successful student must have? Describe the characteristic and give your reasons about your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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