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In your opinion, how is teaching adults different to teaching young learners? v.1

In your opinion, how is teaching adults different to teaching young learners? v. 1
Understanding the fact that teaching adults is different from teaching young learners is a crucial issue which needs deep analysis and accordingly appropriate techniques ought to be chosen. The differences can be scrutinized based on their purpose, educational environment, course books and dependence. First, unlike young learners who are encouraged by their parents to do some language courses, adults are self-motivated because of extrinsic motivations. By this I mean they usually take an educational course to get a promotion, start a career or continue their education. Consequently, they expect to be taught and assessed seriously. Teachers should be disciplined and follow well-designed lesson plans to accomplish their course successfully. They are supposed to prepare exams based on students’ needs and provide them with vital feedback to study better. At the end of the course they want to understand how much they have learned and progressed. Second, in spite of the fact that adults’ classes have some formal equipment such as chairs, laptop, whiteboard and video projector, young learners’ classes are decorated differently to keep them energetic during the class. In fact, in order to attract their attention, schools should provide some toys, realia, specially-designed chairs for kids and colourful equipment. Besides, their classes should be spacious enough for playing different games. Third, the study materials used for teaching both groups are supposed to be different. Course books studied by adults are full of grammatical and lexical parts which need to be taught inductively or deductively, and they usually ask for supplementary materials to improve their vocabulary and reading comprehension. However, course books covered by young learners consist games, songs and stories. Teachers need to be aware of these differences and try to choose suitable teaching methods. Fourth, although young learners rely on their teachers for studying, adults are self-dependent. On one hand, adults can do projects, learn something by self-study, present lectures and make arrangements with their classmates to study out of the class. Accordingly, teachers should provide them with adequate topics to search about, ask them to present lectures and prepare some writing projects. On the other hand, kids like to be taken on educational trips, play vivacious games with their classmates and sing songs in the class. Taking the most important things into consideration, since adults’ learning is completely different from kids and teenagers’ learning, teachers are expected to be familiar with these differences and use the best pedagogical methods to help them achieve their goals.
Understanding the fact that
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teaching
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adults
is
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different
from
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teaching
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young
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learners
is a crucial issue which
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needs
deep analysis and
accordingly
appropriate techniques ought to
be chosen
. The differences can
be scrutinized
based on their purpose, educational environment,
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course
books and dependence.

First
, unlike
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young
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learners
who
are encouraged
by their parents to do
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some
language
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courses
,
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adults
are self-motivated
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because
of extrinsic motivations. By this I mean they
usually
take an educational
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course
to
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get
a promotion,
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start
a career or continue their education.
Consequently
, they
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expect
to
be taught
and assessed
seriously
.
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Teachers
should
be disciplined
and follow well-designed lesson plans to accomplish their
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course
successfully
. They
are supposed
to prepare exams based on students’
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needs
and provide them with vital feedback to study better. At the
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end
of the
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course
they want to understand how much they have learned and progressed.

Second,
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in spite of
the fact that
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adults’
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classes
have
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some
formal equipment such as chairs, laptop, whiteboard and video projector,
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young
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learners’
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classes
are decorated
differently
to
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keep
them energetic during the
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class
. In fact, in order to attract their attention, schools should provide
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some
toys,
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realia
,
specially
-designed chairs for kids and
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colourful
equipment.
Besides
, their
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classes
should be spacious
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enough
for playing
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different
games.

Third, the study materials
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used
for
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teaching
both groups
are supposed
to be
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different
.
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Course
books studied by
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adults
are full of grammatical and lexical parts which
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need
to
be taught
inductively
or
deductively
, and they
usually
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ask for
supplementary materials to
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improve
their vocabulary and reading comprehension.
However
,
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course
books covered by
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young
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learners
consist games, songs and stories.
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Teachers
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need
to be aware of these differences and try to choose suitable
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teaching
methods.

Fourth, although
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young
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learners
rely on their
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teachers
for studying,
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adults
are self-dependent. On one hand,
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adults
can do projects, learn something by self-study, present lectures and
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make
arrangements with their classmates to study out of the
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class
.
Accordingly
,
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teachers
should provide them with adequate topics to search about, ask them to present lectures and prepare
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some
writing projects.
On the other hand
, kids like to
be taken
on educational trips, play vivacious games with their classmates and sing songs in the
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class
.

Taking the most
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important
things into consideration, since
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adults’
learning is completely
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different
from kids and
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teenagers
’ learning,
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teachers
are
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expected
to be familiar with these differences and
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use
the best pedagogical methods to
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help
them achieve their goals.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay In your opinion, how is teaching adults different to teaching young learners? v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
408 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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