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In your opinion, do teenagers like to live in families where their parents often quarrel? why?

In your opinion, do teenagers like to live in families where their parents often quarrel? why? ndoQE
Today, family relationship between parent and their childrent is more and more distance and most is when their child was become teenager. If teenagers lives in their house where their parents often quarrel, they would not feel comfortable and might have bad attitude with their parents and some will get mental health problem. Most parents realize that arguing in front of their children is not a good idea. But once there is a problem between a couple, they are can not control their emotions. Since then, quarrels have broken out as usual. And children are the ones who suffer the heaviest consequences. I think the parents thinks that children do not pay attention to the arguments of adults. But in fact, they always watches that relationship. Parents' discord, stress, even quarrels, fights will leave children with negative psychological that affect their physical and mental health as they become worrier than other friends, not confident about themself and their family, lonely and lost in their house, have bad attitude and the worst is the want to kill themself. No matter how modern society is, parents' lifestyle still has a great influence on the formation of children's personality. Children often action the behavior of their parents or adults in the family. As a parent, please love and pay attention to your child more, let's build a family together so that the child has a happy family instead of a quarreling and unhappy family.
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,
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relationship between
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and their
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childrent
is more and more distance and most is when their child
was become
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teenager
. If
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teenagers
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lives
in their
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house
where their
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parents
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often
quarrel, they would not feel comfortable and might have
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bad
attitude with their
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parents
and
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some
will
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get
mental health problem. Most
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parents
realize that arguing in front of their
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children
is not a
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good
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idea
.
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But
once there is a problem between a couple, they are
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can
not control their emotions. Since then, quarrels have broken out as usual. And
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children
are the ones who suffer the heaviest consequences. I
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think
the
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parents
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that
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children
do not pay attention to the arguments of adults.
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in fact, they always
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watches
that relationship. Parents' discord,
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stress
, even quarrels, fights will
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leave
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children
with
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negative
psychological that affect their physical and mental health as they become worrier than other friends, not confident about
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themself
and their
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family
, lonely and lost in their
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house
, have
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bad
attitude and the worst is the want to kill
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themself
. No matter how modern society is, parents' lifestyle
still
has a great influence on the formation of children's personality.
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Children
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often
action the behavior of their
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parents
or adults in the
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family
. As a
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parent
,
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please
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love
and pay attention to your child more,
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let
's build a
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family
together
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so
that the child has a happy
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family
instead
of a quarreling and unhappy
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family
.
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IELTS essay In your opinion, do teenagers like to live in families where their parents often quarrel? why?

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