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In your free time, you can engage in a variety of activities

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In your free time, you can engage in a variety of activities. Weekends are my free time, and I usually spend it reading books and swimming. I prefer to read books in a silent room because it makes me feel more at ease. The book gives me a lot of knowledge and thinking. One of the books I read was by Bill Gates, an American billionaire. His books give me a great inspiration in life. In addition, I spend less time swimming with my family because swimming improves my health and makes me healthier. In short, weekends are the best time to unwind after a long week of school.
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, you can engage in a variety of activities. Weekends are my free
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, and I
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spend it reading
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and swimming. I prefer to read
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in a silent room
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gives me
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a lot of
knowledge and thinking. One of the
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books
I read was by Bill Gates, an American billionaire. His
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give me a great inspiration in life.
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, I spend less
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swimming with my family
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swimming
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improves
my health and
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to unwind after a long week of school.
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IELTS essay In your free time, you can engage in a variety of activities

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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