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do you think people in your community are generally happy?

do you think people in your community are generally happy? 1bLeM
Having lived in Tên Lửa area for 4 years, I basically believe the citizens here are mostly happy because of three main reasons. To begin with, this neighborhood is a secure and safe place to live in. We hardly ever hear about any robbery in town and there are some police officers who live around here too. Moreover, being known as such a quiet town is also an important reason why people living here are so satisfied. Despite staying nearby Aeon mall Bình Tân, which is always crowded by hundreds of people until 10 in the evening, the area is quite quiet and secluded. Finally, so warm and friendly are my neighbors that we really appreciate each other. We often give our neighbors some food from the hometown or presents on some special occasions
Having
lived
in
Tên
Lửa
area for 4 years, I
basically
believe the citizens here are
mostly
happy
because
of three main reasons. To
begin
with, this neighborhood is a secure and safe place to
live
in. We hardly ever hear about any robbery in town and there are
some
police officers who
live
around here too.
Moreover
,
being known
as such a quiet town is
also
an
important
reason why
people
living here are
so
satisfied. Despite staying nearby
Aeon
mall
Bình
Tân
, which is always crowded by hundreds of
people
until 10 in the evening, the area is quite quiet and secluded.
Finally
,
so
warm and friendly are my neighbors that we
really
appreciate each other. We
often
give our neighbors
some
food from the hometown or presents on
some
special
occasions
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IELTS essay do you think people in your community are generally happy?

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  American English
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133 words
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