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do you think people in your community are generally happy?

do you think people in your community are generally happy? 1bLeM

Having lived in Tên Lửa area for 4 years, I basically believe the citizens here are mostly happy because of three main reasons. To begin with, this neighborhood is a secure and safe place to live in. We hardly ever hear about any robbery in town and there are some police officers who live around here too. Moreover, being known as such a quiet town is also an important reason why people living here are so satisfied. Despite staying nearby Aeon mall Bình Tân, which is always crowded by hundreds of people until 10 in the evening, the area is quite quiet and secluded. Finally, so warm and friendly are my neighbors that we really appreciate each other. We often give our neighbors some food from the hometown or presents on some special occasions

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