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In what ways can we protect the world we live in?

In what ways can we protect the world we live in? XnE7N
SPEAKING OF preserving the world we live in, we are NOT ONLY talking of our future but even the future of every organism that inhabits or will inhabit the earth. APPARENTLY, sometimes, we forget that we are surrounded by a wide flora and fauna that we must try to defend from our wrong choices. I AM UNDER THE IMPRESSION THAT we might need a sort of "nationalism", in the sense that we should at least share common challenges and opportunities to save our planet. We have faced many challenges over the years, and I WILL DEFINITELY SAY THAT only sometimes we have reacted in the interests of the environment. Most of the time, it was in our interests. THE THINGS THAT BOTHER ME THE MOST IS that small changes in everyday life would be enough to start seeing some improvements in our lives and maybe move on to more challenging steps. I MEAN reducing water consumption or making the separate collection, giving materials a new life, and allowing recirculation are just some of the things I recommend. I WOULD ADD, for instance, that I would love to see people use less cars. If we put aside the selfish concept of possessing valuable goods and put more trust in "car sharing", we could have far fewer cars on our roads. And THE WAY I SEE IT, it would be a good choice for the environment as much as it is for us! Fewer cars on the road mean less difficulty in finding a parking space, which in cities like Rome is a great cause of stress. TO SUM UP we should keep in mind that before the damage becomes irreparable, we should all try to help our planet. I DARE SAY THAT surely it is easier to start today and do little at a time, than having to resort to extreme measures later.
SPEAKING OF preserving the world we
live
in, we are NOT
ONLY
talking of our future
but
even the future of every organism that inhabits or will inhabit the earth.
APPARENTLY
,
sometimes
, we forget that we
are surrounded
by a wide flora and fauna that we
must
try to defend from our
wrong
choices.

I AM UNDER THE IMPRESSION THAT we might need a sort of
"
nationalism
"
, in the sense that we should at least share common challenges and opportunities to save our planet.

We have faced
many
challenges over the years, and I WILL DEFINITELY SAY THAT
only
sometimes
we have reacted in the interests of the environment. Most of the time, it was in our interests. THE THINGS THAT BOTHER ME THE MOST IS that
small
changes
in everyday life would be
enough
to
start
seeing
some
improvements in our
lives
and maybe
move
on to more challenging steps. I MEAN reducing water consumption or making the separate collection, giving materials a new life, and allowing recirculation are
just
some of the
things I recommend. I WOULD
ADD
,
for instance
, that I would
love
to
see
people
use
less
cars
. If we put aside the selfish concept of possessing valuable
goods
and put more trust in
"
car sharing
"
, we could have far fewer
cars
on our roads. And THE WAY I
SEE
IT, it would be a
good
choice for the environment as much as it is for us! Fewer
cars
on the road mean less difficulty in finding a parking space, which in cities like Rome is a great cause of
stress
.

TO SUM UP we should
keep
in mind that
before
the damage becomes irreparable, we should all try to
help
our planet. I DARE SAY THAT
surely
it is easier to
start
today
and do
little
at a time, than having to resort to extreme measures later.
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IELTS essay In what ways can we protect the world we live in?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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