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in what way is your diet different from when you were a young child ?

in what way is your diet different from when you were a young child? WygpN
when I was a kid, I can eat everything. Due to having no idea about the nutrition of fats, sugar in there. I just eat to satisfy my appetite. Nevertheless, now I’m growing up, I can consider what I need for my body based on food labels on products or listen to recommended leading dietitians on the Internet. Therefore, I will be able to control the temptation by the food and, thus, keep my body fit.
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I was a kid, I can eat everything. Due to having no
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idea
about the nutrition of fats, sugar in there. I
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eat to satisfy my appetite.
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I’m growing up, I can consider what I need for my body based on food labels on products or listen to recommended leading dietitians on the Internet.
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, I will be able to control the temptation by the food and,
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my body fit.
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IELTS essay in what way is your diet different from when you were a young child?

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1 paragraphs
76 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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