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People should only buy locally grown food because it is better for individuals and society

People should only buy locally grown food because it is better for individuals and society jRDBN
Nutrients not only have vital roles in living creatures, but also have plenty of impact on society in terms of economy and localization. Some believe that people should only consume locally grown yield, however others suggest that we should not limit variations. Although it might be a good idea to support locals with buy necessities only from local residents, this is not completely applicable, also could be detrimental for consumers.
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of impact on society in terms of economy and localization.
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to support locals with
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from local residents, this is not completely applicable,
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IELTS essay People should only buy locally grown food because it is better for individuals and society

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  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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