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In western countries people spend a lot of money on their pets.What are advantages and disadvantages?

In western countries people spend a lot of money on their pets. What are advantages and disadvantages? EddwL
Irrefutably, pets are true companions of humans. People in western countries lavishly spend on their and many people have more than one pet. It is also status symbol of filthy rich people to have a petbof superior breed. As every coin has two sides having a pet also has merits and demerits which are discussed in the following paragraph. To embark with advantages, a pet is a true friend who gives unconditional love to its owner. An owner never feel lonely in its presence, as a pet gives immense love and affection which consequently cheers up the mood of a person. Despite of the friendly attitude pets are very helpful to keep a house safe from avoid theft. They serve the security purpose as well. To illustrate, a dog always alert his owner by barking uf he finds unusual thing or a person in the house. Also there are specific breeds of dogs that’s are used by policemen to find the camps of terrorist because of smelling skill of dogs. Moreover, pets have an extraordinary senses to sense the danger or any natural disaster like earthquake beforehand. As every garden has weed these are some disadvantages of getting pets as well. They need nurturing and pampering owner need to take care of the personal hygiene of their pets otherwise it can cause various ailments to the pet. In addition to it, one can never leave pet all alone at home for lore than certain hours. To epitomise, if a family going on vacation either they have to leave the pet at someone’s house for care or leave it at a pet shelter. On the top of that, in case of dog particular, if a dog bite stranger it will have serious consequences of it because in western countries, there are proper rules and regulations. A victim can take legal action on the owner of the pet. To recapitulate, there are both pros and cons of having a pet. The owner should take care and be fully responsible for the well-being and behaviour of the pet.
Irrefutably
,
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pets
are true companions of humans.
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People
in western countries
lavishly
spend on their and
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many
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people
have more than one pet. It is
also
status symbol of filthy rich
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people
to have a
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petbof
superior breed. As every coin has two sides having a pet
also
has merits and demerits which
are discussed
in the following paragraph.

To embark with advantages, a pet is a true friend who gives unconditional
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love
to its
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owner
. An
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owner
never feel lonely in its presence, as a pet gives immense
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love
and affection which
consequently
cheers up the mood of a person.
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Despite of
the friendly attitude
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pets
are
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very
helpful to
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keep
a
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house
safe from avoid theft. They serve the security purpose
as well
. To illustrate, a
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dog
always alert his
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owner
by barking
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uf
he finds unusual thing or a person in the
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house
.
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Also
there are specific breeds of
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dogs
that’s are
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used
by policemen to find the camps of terrorist
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because
of smelling
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skill
of
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dogs
.
Moreover
,
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pets
have an extraordinary senses to sense the
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danger
or any natural disaster like earthquake beforehand.

As every garden has weed these are
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some
disadvantages of getting
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pets
as well
. They need nurturing and pampering
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owner
need to take care of the personal hygiene of their
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pets
otherwise
it can cause various ailments to the pet.
In addition
to it, one can never
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leave
pet all alone at home for lore than certain hours. To
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epitomise
, if a family going on vacation either they
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have to
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leave
the pet at someone’s
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house
for care or
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leave
it at a pet shelter. On the top of that, in case of
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dog
particular, if a
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dog
bite stranger it will have serious consequences of it
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because
in western countries, there are proper
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rules
and regulations. A victim can take legal action on the
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owner
of the pet.

To recapitulate, there are both pros and cons of having a pet. The
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owner
should take care and be
fully
responsible for the well-being and
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behaviour
of the pet.
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IELTS essay In western countries people spend a lot of money on their pets. What are advantages and disadvantages?

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