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•In Vietnam nowadays, a majority of school-leavers make every effort to earn a place at university. •Why do you think this is happening? And what consequences may this trend have on society? •Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

•In Vietnam nowadays, a majority of school-leavers make every effort to earn a place at university. •Why do you think this is happening? And what consequences may this trend have on society? • nXNPP
A few years ago, the number of people going to university in Vietnam was low, compared to other countries graduating from high school. However, the number of students trying to go to university after graduating from high school has increased significantly today. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and examine the consequences of studying at colleges. The main cause of this problem is job opportunities. Firstly, the truth is that to get high-quality job, the essential element is a college degree in hand.
A few years ago, the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
going to university in Vietnam was low, compared to other countries graduating from high school.
However
, the number of students trying to go to university after graduating from high school has increased
significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and examine the consequences of studying at colleges.

The main cause of this problem is job opportunities.
Firstly
, the truth is that to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
high-quality job, the essential element is a college degree in hand.
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IELTS essay •In Vietnam nowadays, a majority of school-leavers make every effort to earn a place at university. •Why do you think this is happening? And what consequences may this trend have on society? •

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