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In toursim Some people argue host nation has in many ways benefits other disagree that describe both views and give opinion

In toursim Some people argue host nation has in many ways benefits other disagree that describe both views and give opinion JKN26
Tourism is one of the most key sources for some countries economic growth. It is considered by some that host country has more advantages in tourism, while others say it doesn’t. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On the one hand, tourism can lead one countries economic and city development such as building precious infrastructure, eye catching city Center and so on. In other words, tourism would great impact on national modernization which could help People's livelihood. Tourism is great for local products, local food store and street foods that would help mid range and lower income people. According to more traveler, that is indicated that country government or city council is more aware about crime and Fraud. Therefore, more foreigner invest on that country significantly high as well as making global relationship which would help domestic industry. On the other hand, a number of regraded that traveler and host countries both equally have benefits. Travelers can enjoy local history, heritage, architecture as well as local food which would boost his knowledge and understanding different environment and people. however, it is too costly to travel unknown places where traveler doesn't know what is the price of local products. Therefore, some bad people take advantages. In my opinion, tourism brings advantages for host country depends on travellers budget. However, focusing only Tourism would destroy other sectors. In conclusion, host country offers foreigners their history, environment, Heritage and also represent world their reputation. I believe that tourism extended home nation's development.
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Tourism
is one of the most key sources for
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some
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countries
economic growth. It
is considered
by
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some
that
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host
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country
has more advantages in
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tourism
, while others say it doesn’t. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in
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favour
of the latter.

On the one hand,
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tourism
can lead one
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countries
economic and city development such as building precious infrastructure, eye catching city Center and
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so
on. In
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other
words,
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tourism
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would great
impact on national modernization which could
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help
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People
's livelihood.
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Tourism
is great for
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local
products,
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local
food store and street foods that would
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help
mid range and lower income
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people
. According to more
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traveler
, that
is indicated
that
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country
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government
or city council is more aware about crime and Fraud.
Therefore
,
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more foreigner
invest on that
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country
significantly
high
as well
as making global relationship which would
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help
domestic industry.

On the
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other
hand, a number of regraded that
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traveler
and
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host
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countries
both
equally
have benefits.
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Travelers
can enjoy
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local
history, heritage, architecture
as well
as
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local
food which would boost his knowledge and understanding
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different
environment and
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people
.
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however
, it is too costly to travel unknown places where
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traveler
doesn't know what is the price of
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local
products.
Therefore
,
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some
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bad
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people
take advantages.

In my opinion,
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tourism
brings advantages for
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host
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country
depends on
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travellers
budget.
However
, focusing
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only
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Tourism
would
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destroy
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other
sectors.

In conclusion
,
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host
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country
offers foreigners their history, environment, Heritage and
also
represent world their reputation. I believe that
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tourism
extended home nation's development.
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IELTS essay In toursim Some people argue host nation has in many ways benefits other disagree that describe both views and give opinion

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
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